Post by Kiara Illia on Sept 15, 2008 19:58:40 GMT -5
Edge of the Earth
An alternate Breaking Dawn
An alternate Breaking Dawn
Our story picks up when Jacob Black runs away. While he’s gone, Bella Swan begins her long journey towards becoming Isabella Cullen. Jacob needs something to get his mind off of his former love so he embarks on his journey to imprint on another girl.[/blockquote]
Just as he is beginning to think that no other girl exists, and finds that the wedding is just one day away, Jacob starts heading home. But one small incident, as he soon finds, will change his life forever…
As Jacob runs through the forest, almost close enough to home, he sees a girl. She’s on the balls of her feet, ready to jump from a cliff. But this isn’t the normal cliff diving that Jacob is used to. This is suicide.
Then bada bang, bada boom it hits him. She’s the one. Jacob doesn’t even know her name—only that she means everything to him. There’s just one thing to do… He runs to save her. Seeing the large wolf, the girl jumps and hits the ground.
When Jacob finds her, she’s still alive, but barely. There’s no time for a proper rescue, and without thinking, Jacob runs off with her to the one person he knows can fix anything—Carlisle Cullen. And he has one thought running through his head, “Save her, whatever you have to do… just save her,”
But timing is not on Jacob’s side. He finds Carlisle at the wedding, and breaks in. There’s nothing more important to him than saving this girl. Soon after the reception begins, Carlisle bites the girl, injecting her with venom to save her life—much to Bella’s anger.
But saving the girl, Kiara Illia, is not something that should have happened. She is a sour, sarcastic girl who reminds Jacob of Rosalie Hale. But he’s in love with her, no mater how little she loves him.
Saving Kiara also brings more problems than her attitude. Bella is furious with Jacob. He refused to think of her as a vampire, but to save the girl he imprinted on, he asks Carlisle to change her? Not to mention that Bella might be the slightest bit jealous of the beautiful vampire girl.
And then there’s the pack…
It is Sam Uley’s duty to destroy the Cullens. They broke the treaty, and now they must pay the price. But Jacob can’t destroy his love, and he goes back on Sam and creates his own pack with Seth, who also enjoys the Cullens as who they are, not what they are.
With the separation of the packs, Sam won’t attack… for now. But with the Cullens broken up after Kiara’s change, and refusal to stay vegetarian, Sam might have the chance of a life time…
Who’s side are you on?
[url=edgeoftheearth.proboards102.com][size=3]Edge of the Earth[/size][/url]
An alternate [i]Breaking Dawn[/i]
[size=1][blockquote]Our story picks up when Jacob Black runs away. While he’s gone, Bella Swan begins her long journey towards becoming Isabella Cullen. Jacob needs something to get his mind off of his former love so he embarks on his journey to imprint on another girl.
Just as he is beginning to think that no other girl exists, and finds that the wedding is just one day away, Jacob starts heading home. But one small incident, as he soon finds, will change his life forever…
As Jacob runs through the forest, almost close enough to home, he sees a girl. She’s on the balls of her feet, ready to jump from a cliff. But this isn’t the normal cliff diving that Jacob is used to. This is suicide.
Then [b]bada bang, bada boom[/b] it hits him. She’s the one. Jacob doesn’t even know her name—only that she means everything to him. There’s just one thing to do… He runs to save her. Seeing the large wolf, the girl jumps and hits the ground.
When Jacob finds her, she’s still alive, but barely. There’s no time for a proper rescue, and without thinking, Jacob runs off with her to the one person he knows can fix anything—Carlisle Cullen. And he has one thought running through his head, “[i]Save her, whatever you have to do… just save her,[/i]”
But timing is not on Jacob’s side. He finds Carlisle at the wedding, and breaks in. There’s nothing more important to him than saving this girl. Soon after the reception begins, Carlisle bites the girl, injecting her with venom to save her life—much to Bella’s anger.
But saving the girl, Kiara Illia, is not something that should have happened. She is a sour, sarcastic girl who reminds Jacob of Rosalie Hale. But he’s in love with her, no mater how little she loves him.
Saving Kiara also brings more problems than her attitude. Bella is furious with Jacob. He refused to think of her as a vampire, but to save the girl he imprinted on, he asks Carlisle to change her? Not to mention that Bella might be the slightest bit jealous of the beautiful vampire girl.
And then there’s the pack…
It is Sam Uley’s duty to destroy the Cullens. They broke the treaty, and now they must pay the price. But Jacob can’t destroy his love, and he goes back on Sam and creates his own pack with Seth, who also enjoys the Cullens as who they are, not what they are.
With the separation of the packs, Sam won’t attack… for now. But with the Cullens broken up after Kiara’s change, and refusal to stay vegetarian, Sam might have the chance of a life time…[/size][/blockquote]
[center][b]Who’s side are you on?[/b][/center]